FIRST CHAPTER CRITIQUE
SERVICES
Your opening chapter sets the tone for your entire story. It’s your one chance to hook your reader from the very first page. If it doesn’t grab attention, readers won’t keep going… no matter how good the rest of your book is.
That’s where I come in!
I provide a detailed, honest, and actionable critique of your first chapter so you can strengthen your opening and make sure your story starts as strong as possible.
Pricing is $80 USD, 5,000 words max.
Who This Is For
- Writers starting their first draft
- Authors preparing to query agents
- Self-publishing authors who want a strong, professional opening
- Anyone who wants to make sure their story hooks readers immediately
How It Works
- Send your first chapter (up to ~5,000 words)
- I’ll review and annotate your chapter
- You’ll receive:
- In-line comments
- A detailed summary with key strengths + areas to improve
My Feedback Covers:
- Hook & Opening Impact
Does your first page pull readers in? I’ll break down what’s working—and what’s not. - Pacing & Flow
I’ll identify slow points, rushed moments, and where your chapter can be tightened. - Character Introduction
Are your characters engaging and clear from the start? I’ll give feedback on how they come across to a reader. - Clarity & Readability
I’ll point out confusing sections, awkward phrasing, or anything that disrupts immersion. - Overall First Impression
A reader’s honest perspective on how your story feels, flows, and lands.
Ready to Work Together?
A strong first chapter can be the difference between a reader getting hooked or putting your book down. This service helps you make sure your story starts with impact, confidence, and clarity.
Please fill out the First Chapter Critique Request Form, and I’ll get back to you soon with availability and next steps!